中考英文作文模板(观点态度型议论文)
中考英文作文模板(观点态度型议论文)
第一部分 观点态度型议论文体裁解读及写法点拨
【体裁解读】
以简明扼要的主题句为写作核心,是该类作文的基本要求。但在写作过程中,往往会因为支撑信息的说服力不够,或是提出建议时的论点涣散,而出现中心论点摇摆、模棱两可的错误。因此,论据的有效使用,在“观点态度”类作文中就显得尤为重要。
【写法点拨】
在写作的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作:
1.表明态度。
在陈列别人的观点之后,要清楚明确地表明自己的态度和立场,可以支持某观点,或者不同意某观点,为下文的辩论做好铺垫。
2.论据支撑论点。
这是文章的重要部分。作者立足于自己的观点,从各个方面证明自己观点的正确性,可通过反例或者经典例子证明自己的观点是正确的。
3.总结全文。
在文章结尾处要总结全文,再次强调自己观点的准确性,呼应前文,使文章的结构更完整。
第二部分 观点态度型议论文万能黄金模板
①It is known to all that .(观点)
②First of all, (原因一)By (做法),we can (好处)Secondly, (原因二)Thirdly, .(原因三)
③ (观点)is good for . So let's !(观点)
【模板内容要点】
① 阐述一种观点
② 对观点进行分析
③ 回归观点,首尾呼应
注:模板内容可根据题目要求和具体情况取舍。
第三部分 必备词汇与套用句型
【必备亮点词汇】
approve 同意;赞成 | agree 同意 | share 分享 | prefer 更喜欢 |
wise 明智的 | reasonable 理智的 | favorable 赞成的 | admire 赞赏 |
appreciate 欣赏 | think highly of 高度评价 | cannot agree more 非常同意 | disapprove 不赞成 |
disagree 不同意 | unwise 不明智的 | ridiculous 荒唐的 | foolish 愚蠢的 |
childish 幼稚的 | hate 讨厌 | hatred 厌恶 | angry 生气的 |
【经典套用句型】
闪亮篇首句
(1) I fully agree with the statement that … because … 我完全同意...这种说法,因为....
(2) More and more people are talking about whether we should shop online. 越来越多的人讨论我们是否应该网上购物。
(3) My opinion is that we should spend more time with our family. 我的观点是我们应该多花时间和家人待在一起。
(4) I think that traditional festivals are much more important than western festivals in China. 我认为,在中国,传统节日比西方节日更重要。
(5) As far as 1 am concerned, I think that we should pay more attention to environmental protection. 就我而言,我认为我们应该多花时间在环境保护上。
(6) Personally, I like to advocate that students should spend more time in exercise. 个人而言,我提倡学生多花时间锻炼。
(7) I don't think it is a good idea to lose weight by diet. 我不认为节食减肥是个好主意。
(8) For me, the former is surely a wise choice. 对我来说,前者无疑是个明智的选择。
(9) From where I stand, I support that... 从我的角度来看,我支持......
出彩篇中句
(1) I hold the view for the reason that.. 我坚持这个观点的理由是......
(2) What is more, it will do good to our environment. 还有,这对我们的环境是有益的。
(3) I think that B is a better choice for the following three reasons. 我认为B会更好,有以下三个理由。
(4) Firstly, (Reason 1). Secondly, (Reason 2). Thirdly, (Reason 3). 第一点,(理由一)。第二点,(理由二)。第三点,(理由三)。
(5) The reason is that.....理由是.....
(6) For one thing, I think it is much more convenient to go by bike. For another thing, by doing so, we can lower the emission of carbon dioxide. 一方面,我认为骑单车更方便。另一方面,这样做可以减少二氧化碳的排放。
(7) On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。
精彩篇尾句
(1 ) Thus we can conclude that...因此我们总结.....
(2) So it can be concluded that ... important to us. 所以可以得出结论说,......对我们很重要。
(3) In a word, ...play(s) an important role in our life.总而言之,......在我们生活中扮演着重要角色。
(4) From what has been discussed above, you may agree that...根据上面讨论的,你也许会同意.....
(5) In conclusion, we should pay more attention to...总之,我们要更加重视.....
第四部分 模板范文演练
常言道:“早起的鸟儿有虫吃。”(Early bird catches the worm.)早起有助于我们的健康、生活、学习·····请以“The Advantages of Getting up Early”为题,并结合自己或他人的实际,写一篇短文。
要求:
1.条理清楚,意思连贯,书写工整。
2.80词左右,可适当发挥。
3.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名。
The Advantages of Getting up Early
【万能模板套用分析】
首先,提出主题。→ 主题
其次,举例论证好处。→ 举例
最后,呼应主题。→ 呼应主题
【满分范文]
The Advantages of Getting up Early
It is known to all that early bird catches the worm. ①There are plenty of ( 短语优先原则 )advantages of getting up early indeed.
First of all ( 一二三原则,使用了过渡词 ),people who get up early can have more time to get prepared for one day's work and study. ② By getting up 30 minutes earlier, we can have 30minutes to plan a day.( 长短句结合原则 )Secondly, getting up early means we can do some morning exercise to improve our health.
Getting up early is good for our physical and mental health, so let's be an early bird! ③
你也可以这样表达:
①As the saying goes, "Early bird catches the worm.”
②Firstly, people getting up early can have more time to get prepared for one day's work and study.
③Getting up early can do us good both physically and mentally, so let's be an early bird!
【范文译文】
早起的好处
众所周知,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的确有很多好处。
第一,早起的人有更多的时间为一天的工作和学习做准备。通过早30分钟起床,我们可以有30分钟为一天做计划。第二,早起意味着我们可以做些晨练来改善我们的健康状况。
早起对身心健康都有好处,所以让我们做一只早起的鸟儿吧!
第五部分 热点话题满分叙事记叙文必背
(一)
湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设,我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动,从小事做起,让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生,请以“Start out small”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书。
要点提示:1.多种植树木和花草,不乱砍伐树木。
2.购物时重复使用袋子。
3.不乱扔垃圾,保持河流等干净。
4.遵守公共秩序,做文明学生。
要求:1. 80词以上。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文章必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
参考词汇:protect the environment;reuse bags;plant;cut down;throw;wait in line;be wise;obey public rules
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for ourhometown?
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下如何才能为“美丽湘西”建设做出贡献。所提供的材料中列举了我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动,从小事做起,让我们的家乡变得更美。主要从 1. 多种植树木和花草,不乱砍伐树木。2. 购物时重复使用袋子。3. 不乱扔垃圾,保持河流等干净。4. 遵守公共秩序,做文明学生。这四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。
注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Start out small
Hello, everyone. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?In order to make our hometown more beautiful, as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomly. Second, we had better reuse the bag when shopping. We can't throw rubbish about, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must obey public rules and be civilized students. When we got on the bus, we should wait in line.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I think we should start from small things. 我认为我们应该从小事做起。we should start from small things.做think的宾语。
【高分句型二】
When we got on the bus, we should wait in line. 我们应该排队等候上车。
句子When we got on the bus是由when引导的时间状语从句。
(二)
假如你是阳光中学的李华,每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由;同时,对你的选择的课程提出建议。
Required course | Elective Course | |||
Subject | Travel of science l introducing scientists and inventions | Subject | Photography l taking photos | Gardening l growing flowers |
Teacher | a professor | Teacher | a young reporter | 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. School’s garden |
Time & Place | l 2:30 p.m.- 3:15 p.m. l school hall | Time & Place | l 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m. l City Park | An old gardener |
Tip | take notebooks and pens | Tip | Take cameras | tools offered by school |
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息;
2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由,并对其提出建议;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。
审题可知,短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面:首先介绍必修课程Travel of science,题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示,学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可;接下来应根据个人情况,从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个,阐述自己的理由,并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象,结合自己的实际生活,补充具体的内容,再用英语表达出来。
写作时应注意:首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不能遗漏要点,而且注意分清层次和结构,使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容,主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯、表达自然。
【参考范文】
Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So, you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程,并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个,介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因,并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点:
首先文章内容完整,符合题目要求,没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理,理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯,符合该情景。
其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构符合英语的表达习惯,短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构,增强了文章的表现力。
文中较好的短语和句式有:We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors. 等等。
(三)
"你养我长大,我陪你变老."父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱.今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会.请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文.
要点:
(1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;
(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;
(3)拥有爱心,教我学会……;
(4)今天,我要为你们……(自主发挥,至少两点).
注意事项:
(1)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息.
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.
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【参考范文】
You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.You give me life and take care of me all the time.(给我生命,一直照顾我成长) When I have problems with my study and life,you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. 【高分句型一】
In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education,you always work hard from morning till night. (努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件)Everyone knows you are the persons full of love.You are ready to help people in need.It is you who teach me to be a kind person.【高分句型二】(拥有爱心,教我做慈爱的人)
Dad and mum,today I'll cook dinner for you.I'll go for a walk with you after dinner.(今天要为父母做的两件事)I hope you will be happy an d healthy forever!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
When I have problems with my study and life,you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me.当我的学习和生活有问题时,你总是耐心地帮助我,鼓励我.
when当……时候,引导时间状语从句,adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事,
【高分句型二】
It is you who teach me to be a kind person.是你教会我做一个善良的人.
本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who …
(四)
哈佛大学的一项研究表明,爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感,更有前途.请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇8o词左右的英语短文,描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法.
参考词汇:
Chores | take out the rubbish sweep the floor wash the clothes do the dishes water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch … … |
Opinions | Pros:develop our independence take care of ourselves … Cons:a waste of time no need to … … |
注意:文中不得出现真实的校名和人名.
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I
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【参考范文】
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy. As for me, I often help them do housework. I take out the rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning.I help my mother cook the lunch. I always wash clothes and do the dishes for my family.My parents are very happy. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes.(平时所作家务)
I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves.【高分句型一】
In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.(家务的看法)【高分句型二】